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  1. A great response. Better than the original. I like the two kinds of enjambment there.

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  2. I hope it's not too close to yours. I posted it and then thought . . . "maybe that's too close."

    Take care,
    ---Mike

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  3. Not too close at all. And strangely, this one bears some similarity to a visual pwoermd I'm going to try to design tonight, though I came up with it this morning.

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